Hi Michael,
Good job! Here are some remarks to improve it:
Tell the Hibernate version you use. Some materials on the internet refers to hibernate 1.2 and people are confused.
Don't be too precise in your links. Example for the documentation, which is generated and where anchors can be renamed.
I'm not sure
Code:
<property name="transaction.factory_class">
net.sf.hibernate.transaction.JDBCTransactionFactory
</property>
works
Tell
Code:
<property name="transaction.factory_class">net.sf.hibernate.transaction.JDBCTransactionFactory</property>
Points to the hibernate features list to show the "extra" capabilities of Hibernate.
Put at the begining a short summary of what an ORM tool do. It'll help people to be in the mood.